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Hinata Full body attempt

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I can't do full body to this day... This is one of my attempts, as you can see the legs are too straight looking and so are her pants... I think the top half came out alright... minus her hand of course
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Make
LG Electronics, Inc.
Model
LG RUMOR2
Date Taken
Sep 6, 2011, 6:30:19 PM
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Seigeengine's avatar
Nice try. Things I want to point out:

Hair looks weird on the right side of the pic.
It's very.... solid. Try some shading. It's not easy, but it's very important, and can turn a good piece into a beautiful one ( look at reality. Reality comes in shades ).
Her calves look bigger than her pant-legs, which means her thighs.
For a better idea of shapes, try to be looking at something that you're drawing. If you're trying to draw a leg, look at a picture of a leg that's sort of roughly similar. It doesn't have to be too close, because, again, you can modify it as you see fit, but it'll help you get a better idea of the structure and shape of a leg as far as being able to adequately present it artistically.
The eyes are a little weird, making it sort of look like her right ( our left ) eye is a lazy eye.

That's not quite everything I could mention, but it's the majority of the important stuff, and hopefully it'll give you a good idea of what to work on.